This is the first draft of our film opening.
In this opening there are a lot of things that need to be changed. The lightening in the some of the shots needs to be changed as some shots are lighter then others. Another shot that needs to be changed is when Charlie is being caught on cctv, you cant see what is being wrote on the paper she is writing on. We will have to change this so that you can see what is being said. When we re shot the bits that need to be done we will have to make sure that shoot them at the right time so that the lightening doesnt go wrong.
Feedback
When we got the feedback from our class and other classes we was told some postive and negative things. The postive feedback we got about the sounds was that the music that is in our opening goes well with the rest of the film it fits in. There would need to be a more scarier sound on the last shot when the hand is shown dragging down the door. The sound effects that we could use would be screaming on the shot when Emma is trying to get out the door. The feedback that we got about the acting was that it was a good, and it worked well. The negative feedback about the acting was that some of the shots Kieran smirkes in and it isnt relevant to the story. The feedback that we got about the camera shots was that they were good steady shots, they all fitted in well with the rest of the film. There was one shot at the end that was a little shacky and rough that we have to be re-shot. Alot of the feedback said that the titles were plain but you could tell that it was for a horror genre.The feedback that we got back from the teachers was that we would need to re shoot the shots that have bad lightening, This is only a couple of shots. We would also need to change the titles so that it wasnt as clear and plain but you would be able to tell that it was a horror genre film. The last bit of feedback that we got from the teachers was that we need to take out the sound when the lights flicker.